This is a ghost story that succeeds in mystifying the reader. The literary devices used by Rosemary Timperley reveal how technical a great short story writer must be, particularly a great ghost story writer. However, the reading does not seem technical. “Harry” reads both naturally and intriguingly. That is the true skill of a masterclass writer.
Repetitive Designation
The narrative hook is Mrs. James’ fear of ordinary things. “Such ordinary things make me afraid. Sunshine. Sharp shadows on grass. White roses. Children with red hair. And the name — Harry” (p. 33). While they may be ordinary, this is an extraordinary way to begin a story. The scene portrays a bucolic life, initially evoking a pleasant image. However, the following paragraph, Mrs. James confesses that she “felt a premonition of fear” after she heard the name, Harry (p. 33). The tone of the story shifts.